Title: The Invincible Tortoise (无敌乌龟 - Wu Di Wu Gui) Synopsis: This is the world of cultivators, a world called Skylark. Where people trained themselves and make friends with little spirits as they try to ascend to heaven and leave behind the world of mortals. Basically a damned world where strength rules, and a certain guy both hated and loved this world. His name is Long Tian Gui. A very random name where the characters of both elegant and ugly were together. Meaning a Sky Dragon Turtle. Yeah, there is clearly a character that doesn’t fit. But it fits him rather well. Rather than like the other cultivators who would go out and fight and fight, all for the sake of their face and honor, he would rather sleep and have a lazy life. Power? He was a genius. But who said genius must be known, and cause trouble? They don’t all have to cultivate in the sword! He would be the shield and medical box that is often overlooked. Don’t underestimate the guy who always sleep and seem to never spend any effort! Apparently even spirits likes this kind of life. They would get free food (Ki) that were both high quality and delicious and the guy doesn’t even mind, or make them work! He neither gets angry, nor does he seem to have any desires. Always holed up in his shell of ultimate defense and regeneration. Hell, he even became a doctor (of a sort) where trouble stays away. The hardest and easiest type of guy to hate. And the damn hardest guy to kill. “I don’t care if you want to kill this guy for killing your whole family. Mind doing it out of this room where I don’t have to clean up later? And don’t bring me into this argument, I’m just a poor bystander. Thanks.” Genre: Fantasy, Xianxia.... (Dunno what else) - Just an idea of mine, not sure what's going to happen with this. - Right, I also have a bit of a grammar problem where I switch around my tenses and don't notice. So sorry for that? - If I'm going with this, the story will be at: www.sishenshou.com - But I currently don't have Internet access besides my phone, so I can't post this story or even damn translate my Terror Paradise... well, good thing someone took it up in my absence lol
Ah, sorry, although I am a translator, this is an original. I was just a little tired of the characters where they are greatly wrong and for some reason there must always be a bastard that pops up and call then trash, and then they kill those bastard. This story is more of a point of view from a bystander who wants nothing to do with the drama. Yeah?
I don't know of you have or haven't written this yet, but this definitely sounds like something I want to read.
Like the bystander point of view idea, I've also started getting annoyed with the protagonist that just gets angry at everyone and everyone gets angry at the protagonist for no reason at all other than face
Id like to read it. Xianxia protagonist are constantly making trouble for themselves. Ive never understood it. Whats wrong with keeping a low profile and avoiding trouble? This sounds like an actual smart mc for a change. Making enemies 101 "Random douche lines" (douche) "You have said nasty things about myself/friends/family so now ill be an asshole to you"(Main) "Since you have raised your asshole level ill raise mine"(douche) "ill raise mine even higher"(Main) "Now Ill cripple/kill you"(douche) *Main defeats douche* "Spare me"(douche) "You said you will cripple/kill me so its only fair that ill cripple/kill you"(main) *Everyone nods their heads in agreement cause that's what the background characters are for. To show how awesome the mc is and how he is always correct. Additionally everything he says is to be described as profound. *More powerful sect/clan/relative/lover/friend tries to get revenge. When you see one douche there are always many more behind them (They are like cockroaches).