Discussion The Yuri Garden

Discussion in 'Novel General' started by Moonpearl, Feb 13, 2017.

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What should the next anthology title be? (Format is "__________: A Yuri Garden Anthology")

Poll closed Sep 7, 2022.
  1. Festival of Blooming Flowers

    2 vote(s)
    33.3%
  2. Festival of Blooming Desires

    1 vote(s)
    16.7%
  3. Lily-White Wishes

    2 vote(s)
    33.3%
  4. Lily-White Wishes and Violet Desires

    1 vote(s)
    16.7%
  5. Autumn Lillies

    3 vote(s)
    50.0%
  6. Planted Seeds

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  7. Everlasting Evergreen

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  8. Branches on the Tree of Life

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  9. Perennial Blooms

    1 vote(s)
    16.7%
  10. The Sight by Yuri Lake

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  11. The Good Luck Coin

    1 vote(s)
    16.7%
  12. Yearning Under Rapturous Ideals

    1 vote(s)
    16.7%
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  1. Tsuru55

    Tsuru55 Well-Known Member

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    Another ero yuri doujin (NOT TRANSLATED YET) from the one that did Yuri sekai / Tournament of succubus / Classrep yandere charming a prostitute classmate by putting aphrodisiac on sex toy.
    [Harumachi Tsurara (Shichoson)] Juuniji no Mahoutsukai [Digital]
    There is some kind of mind control but somehow a good ending ? And also a baby for the couple ? So maybe it's dark maybe it's not.
     
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  2. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    Read it before, honestly all the author’s Stories are dark but I don’t mind because I enjoy the way the characters look when they orgasm :blobpeek:
    Honestly, i automatically thought of nhentai when I saw the title because how familiar it looked.

    On a side note:
    These are my favorite yuri hentai
    https://nhentai.net/g/272962/
    (Omegaverse) (English) :aww:
    https://nhentai.net/g/252838/
    (Age Gap) (RikkaXSaaya) (English) :blobalert:
    https://nhentai.net/g/249107/
    (English) (KokoroXMisaki) :blob_plusone:
    https://nhentai.net/g/186118/
    (High ElvXDark Elv) (English) :blobuwu:
    https://nhentai.net/g/278386/
    (Japanese) :blobalert:
    https://nhentai.net/g/279573/
    (Yandere) (English) :notlikeblob:
     
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  3. Tsuru55

    Tsuru55 Well-Known Member

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    Wow... i read until the end of first sex scene (penetration one, not the one that was interrupted). This work is quite good.
     
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  4. Yandere Devil

    Yandere Devil QUEEN OF YURI- Love GL

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    Okay, I removed it:)
     
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  5. Yandere Devil

    Yandere Devil QUEEN OF YURI- Love GL

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    I hope Her Shim-Cheong adapted to drama or anime. This manhwa deserved it.
    I really love this manhwa, obsessive with it. I Love couple most.[​IMG] [​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG] [​IMG][​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
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  6. AliceShiki

    AliceShiki 『Ms. Tree』『Magical Girl of Love and Justice』

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    It's not that hard actually, here is the rough resume of it.

    89nu£ -> 1nu£ tax
    500nu£ -> 22nu£ tax
    Anything above 500nu£ -> add 1nu£ of tax for every 10nu£ donated (aside from the first 500, which only add 22).

    So like... If you were to donate 1500 nu£, you'd pay 22nu£ of tax for the first 500nu£ and another 100nu£ for the last 1000nu£ donated. Totallying 122nu£ of tax.

    That's pretty much it~ (the exact value may differ in 1nu£ of tax due to me being unsure on how it handles numbers that don't end in 0)
     
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  7. crimson_carnation

    crimson_carnation Well-Known Member

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    Ah, it makes more sense now :cookie: Thank you!
     
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  8. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    It looks so nice, if it get adapted I hope they can capture all the emotions from the scenes.
    That being said, I haven’t read it yet
     
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  9. Myrane66

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    Hello, I wanted to ask some opinions regarding my novel. If i removed the gb tag by changing the starting of my novel: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/...irl-now-im-made-a-toy-by-futanari-dark-elves/ (making the mc a lesbian instead of a guy) will it gain more exposure? Will you be more inclined to read it? Will it be more 'accepted' by yuri fans? Don't know man, even it's trivial, I think I just missed on some potential reader base here haha:blobpats:
     
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  10. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    I think you probably would. Not everyone accepts gender bender yuri as yuri, and I think most people prefer non-genderbent yuri even if they do. There aren't many non-genderbent yuri on Scribble Hub as well, so your work might stand out a bit more.

    I'd personally be much more inclined to read it if it wasn't gender bender.
     
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  11. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    Although I don’t tend to read genderbent, the fact that physically, there’s no men and there’s futanari is a great bonus. :blobpeek: I usually enjoy 1vs1 but gangbang is nice too, especially if it might become a yuri harem. :blobpopcorn:Having the Mc being dominated is great, but I hope you include a scene where the Mc can’t be sexually satisfied so he/she ‘milks’ the dark elves completely. :blobnosebleed: Just a suggestion
     
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  12. Ubik

    Ubik Well-Known Member

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    And once again it's me. On the side note nice pictures I have saved a bunch.
    Ok back to topic. For cute fluffy yuri it's very good when situation comes to that. Author stories takes time to fully established couples beyond just flirting and teasing. Kammi Kettu took 18 chapters and Pellan Rise - 21 but then their relationships is on very fluffy and cute side.
    And I and Tsuru get scolded by Moonpearl by linking non accepted links from that source and here we are.... not that links and content are bad :blobspearpeek:
    I kinda think it's late for that no? But Moonpearl is right that GB tag has most turnoff. But even "futanari" is heavy "NO" for some too you know. So you just can't please everyone.
     
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  13. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    I've given up~! I was mostly warning people because it can get you in trouble, but I'm not a mod, so it just gets a bit complicated.

    Also I'm practically comatose from filling out job applications... Too tired... :blobdead:

    That's true, but I think most people who will read a futanari novel are there for the futanari, so that's maybe less of a concern.

    Actually, while I was browsing through the results of the 2019 survey again, another thing occurred to me: the people who consider futanari yuri and the people who consider gender bender yuri don't necessarily overlap.
    And of the 3 people who said that they liked futanari, none said that they believed gender bender yuri is yuri (the best result was "sort of"). (I had to dig into the raw data for that bit - forgot to put it in the report, since I didn't think it would be of interest to anyone.)
    It's not a large sample size, but it's something to consider. Don't know if that means they dislike or wouldn't read gender bender, though.

    @Myrane66
     
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  14. Ubik

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    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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  16. Ubik

    Ubik Well-Known Member

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    I'm no writer, but I think just all that post. You very underestimate your insight.
     
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  17. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    I'd like to drop that sort of advice over there, honestly, but there's nowhere to really do it. They don't have a blog section over there and I can't imagine that anyone would appreciate me making an entire thread just to rant about terrible hentai novels.

    And I imagine that most bad hentai writers would just respond with, "I'm writing for men, not women. Go away."
     
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    Thanks. But I've read it, and I think it doesn't align with me, as the mc actually gets off by being.. raped but pretending not to be. MC's into sm roleplay stuff I guess? The entire premise is rape from the start. (The first arc, kinda)

    The story's like (no it didn't actually happen):
    MC: Ha! I was merely pretending to be raped, but secretly I've been enjoying it! What are you gonna do about it, freaks?
    Them: ..
    MC: ..Please r*pe me more.

    I'll guess I'll just have to keep writing, then. In the future I'll try not include a gb tag and make it purely Yuri, then.
     
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  19. Ubik

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    From when there was forbidden at least:
    The Yuri Writing Help Room (18+)
    It will even count how to not write yuri 101 :blob_grin: Seriously though. I think you should at least mention that target gender groups are different and have different tastes and how it could be viewed from yours PoV. In writing hentai scenarios at least.


    You kinda misunderstand. I mostly point that you should decide what audience you should target. Yuri is different, tastes are different. Gender groups and their tastes are different.
    If you want to get rid of GB tags in story and retcon it yours decision. You are author - it's your creation. We are only readers of it.
     
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    Thanks for your feedback everyone.:blobsmilehappyeyes:
     
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