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Which 2 entries for the Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) did you like the most?

Poll closed Aug 14, 2019.
  1. "Lost at Sea" by Lemonfairy

    3 vote(s)
    11.1%
  2. "Rather than Work for a Black Company" by Wandering Cultivator

    2 vote(s)
    7.4%
  3. “I Wanna Get Married!” by AliceShiki

    3 vote(s)
    11.1%
  4. “I was summoned as a saint, but why is the kingdom only throwing men at me” by binarysoap

    4 vote(s)
    14.8%
  5. “Perfect Day” by crimson_carnation

    11 vote(s)
    40.7%
  6. “Late Night Summon” by GDLiZy

    3 vote(s)
    11.1%
  7. “Spring Dream” by crimson_carnation

    7 vote(s)
    25.9%
  8. “10th Year Anniversary” by AsianessPride

    4 vote(s)
    14.8%
  9. “Unexpected Development” by Titan0fPower

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  10. “The Alchemist’s Familiar” by Ninetailed_Furball

    6 vote(s)
    22.2%
  11. “The Prayer” by Wandering Cultivator

    3 vote(s)
    11.1%
  12. “For My Beloved, I will” by Suou

    2 vote(s)
    7.4%
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  1. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    No, his face - she was looking at a picture of her male lover's face when he'd grown old.

    The MC is female, but she's straight. She goes through each world punishing adulterers, but she sometimes picks up a lover or love interest from the side characters.

    Yeah, I forget about open tabs all the time too. :blobxd:
     
  2. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    Wow, you went on a spree. A for going back 3-4 pages and answering them.
     
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    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    If this is about open tabs then I’m your girl
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  4. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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  5. Ubik

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    @Tsuru55 that was quite an entry with that quote explosion. :blobscream:
    Ahem.
    I will have smaller one :blob_grin:
    If or when I will read it of course I would give my opinion. But not right now unfortunately. Still from tags and description looks nice. But what bothers me are tags "quarrelsome lovers" and quite large mentioned cast for not so big story. Large cast is hard in MTL. When I read The Imperial Doctor Belongs To The Princess where cast is huge. You even don't want to bother with that bunch of side characters.
    If count story in question edits made in October 2019 where another wave of censorship hit that was even more harsh than previous. Those ones that was posted on JJWXC are already mild in smut from the start. And even that was hit rather hard by recent waves. It is on the level where on syosetu they even wouldn't receive R-15 warning. :notlikeblob:
    I merge some of those quotes about this series. No, story is not shitty in any way. But I'm pretty sure it will be not for everyone tastes. Especially how whole plot and interconnection was handled.
    Reading in second to last chapter that whole backstory and points and mission in thousands worlds are lies. Are not a good twist and plot decisions. And when MC asked system will FL have memories from that worlds and receive an answer that she will not. Doesn't make it better.
    In overall, it looks like pretty nice story. But I already said that. :blobsweat_2:
    You know there was. Story in active(?) TL so I will put it in spoiler one.
    It's Beauty Manufacturing System where MC was caught (or rather forced herself in that) in FL revenge plot target her father in that world. That lead to MC death.
    Since system is main antagonist in whole story it teleported MC to place where FL try to took her revenge and that lead to MC death. Even memory wipes were part of system plot.
    But where MC actually fails in QT arks are rare cases. That's true
    I mainly talking about story on RRL. I had quite a large number of tabs with that stories because RRL quite bothersome with reading lists and whole tracking system. And of course there are stories on hiatuses both in RRL and SH. SH has much better interface to check that.
    Oh well. Plot synopsis in spoiler for latest story.
    MC was geeky girl from the beginning and fallen for FL from the start who was her best friend and unrequited love. But in last year in high school FL had fallen for a guy and wanted to marry him after graduation. MC wish them luck cut her ties with FL. Even if FL didn't have any most contacts aside from her. Nothing good came from marriage too. Her husband beaten her every time and FL decides enough is enough. And runway from home because she didn't even have any person who would support her. And was caught by MC that fully support her and finally made confession and said that she love when she smiles. But previously, MC had lived in same city fully changed her image to beauty style but still was single because she still loves FL. And saw how whole story unfolds. She made some revenge. Kidnapped FL husband and brutally mutilate him with crowbar. Then comes and picked FL up when she runawayed. After night together MC goes to shop and during her absence in room FL seen that on TV there are photos of her murdered husband and realizes everything. And made decision that she will remain with MC that become and was only support in her life. MC said that all she wants that FL will keep smile for her.
    IIRC I already some time ago made spoilers for other arks. Oh well.
    I'll try to be short it's enough large spoilers in this post already.
    - Lucille's Unforgettable Family Christmas (2 parts): continuation of "Love My Owner" (where MC turns into cat to become closer with FL). They met on Christmas mother of FL who found out about their relationship. But she supported their relationship as long MC keep her girlfriend smiling and happy.
    - New Year's Resolutions (3 parts) - circles of friends met at MC house at New Year Eve and after some questioning it became known that some of them in love but can't confess to each other so MC started to work as cupid.
    - The Algorithm Of Love(4 chapters) - Near future. MC build gynoid (android) that she wanted to fall in love with her and program her to be like that. She has some doubts that she will feel the same. But in the end she fell for her creation.
    They have their sweet time. Unfortunately MC made very heavy crime. In that time was some laws made that protected androids. And was made MC was forcing her in relationship that FL as android and program her. So in eyes of law she used her and used her helplessness and exploit her. MC was sentenced to jail after court. And because of anti-android movement was sent to max security confine but before that she was rescued by FL. Not to complicate things and to protect FL MC remove all memory about her and return to complete her punishment. After jail she goes to hospital and made surgery to remove all memory about FL and surgery was success. So she will be able to live without a pain and depression that she had that time. So they started living different lives

    But after some time they met again and now FL approached MC and confessed to her, afraid to be rejected. They hooked again and become a couple in the end. Officers that were watched from sidelines didn't find that was breaking the law since FL approached first.
    Chocolate Kiss - continuation of "Our Kisses Note" very sweet valentine story.
    Til Life Do Us Part (2 chapters) - MC mets ghost of her girlfriend at her funeral. Story revolves about their feeling and afterlife. I gave before large spoiler about this one here so this will be all.
    The Kidnapped Princess (6 chapters) - two friends/comrades on quest for rescuing princess. Where one is strong type other is intelligent type sidekick. First is mercenary, other is runaway daughter of nobility. Mercenary have wish to after rescuing princess to ask her hand in marriage. Noble girl secretly in love with her comrade but still helps her in every way as long as she will be happy. Story has more action than other ones. And they finally rescued princess and then become some expected and unexpected development.
    Expected was that those two ended with each other. Unexpected that princess has some crush on noble girl and runaway with them in the end.
    I think God of Tabs is very delighted in what was shown. I hope it will not demand mass sacrifice of those :blobpeek:

    p.s. Yesterday was reading quite funny and entertaining discussion on one of latest manga chapter of "Machikado Mazoku" it has some spoilers from next volume (about 20 chapters ahead of current manga translation). Should now Mazoku could be counted as yuri or not :blob_grin:
    Spoiler in question:
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    Tsuru55 Well-Known Member

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    I didn't try to answer. I just wanted to give you an info about all the series on scribblehub in case you are someone that read series on scribblehub too. If you bother to check series didn't update for a few months.
    Oops. It's just that my brain mostly remember only the mind reader arc because it was the one that made the most impression on me.
    How did police learn that she programmed her android to love her ? Android girl saying too much info to random passer by or to police or random researcher that questionned her ?
    Checked beginning/ending.
    Who is the dyed blonde girl with perfume ???? Why she did that ?
    Speaking of this series that i didn't read or watch the anime, i found a youtube video about the cat in it. He spoke. And what a cool voice and a cool line. *Fangirling*
    WOW O_O *eyes falling from sockets*
    A canon yuri became a true yuri series in the end !?
    *Faint with a nosebleed*
     
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    Tsuru55 Well-Known Member

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    Kinda wanted a yuri... orz
     
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  8. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    It would be nice if it was~!
     
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    Tsuru55 Well-Known Member

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    I mean, i kinda expected from you yuri garden master to share a yuri series. But it's true that this series being yuri is another good idea.
     
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    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    I sometimes read het and BL too~! I wasn't originally recommending this one here, just using it as an example of QT.
     
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    This Is A Pretty Cool Website: https://www.lilykamanga.com/online-store/search Where You Can Buy Yuri Manga, Even Ones That Are Not Translated Into English Online [They Have Yuri Manga That Is Translated But You Can't Find The English Version Online]. I Plan To Placed A Order On The Lily Fairy Tale Series When The Third Manga Is Fully Translated. This Is Also A Yuri Manga: https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=154775 Though It Is Not Translated But You Can Still Read It Raw.
     
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  12. Yandere Devil

    Yandere Devil Well-Known Member

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    @Scribblezo8 i have found many short yuri novel. It’s all sweet, fluffy modern gl novel
    Gentle you Sweet and fluffy modern gl chapter 20, word counts 24,000 http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3972384

    First love after marriage 15 chapters
    http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3555195



    Chunsheng Porcelain (GL) 19 chapters http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=2791261
    Beauty is like porcelain.

    Having said that, the search for Fangze's feelings is also endless.

    An Ran in Du Heng's heart is the celebrity of the dead world. There is a shadow of a sword in Wenrunli, and the wave of water is hidden in the sinking place.
    Content Tags: sweet text karma encounter a natural fit

    Black history short story] Mary Su does not follow the routine 21 chapters
    http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3510269
    Shang Weiyu, who was so sick of Mary Su Wen, bound one day. The anti-Marie Su system, the task is to wear to the majority of Marie Suwen to lower the brainless Marie Su aura.
      Isn't it Mary Su, the father who knows the plot is just doing his sleeves and hammering one hand without any counsel.
      But Mary Su's one after another collapses, and she doesn't follow the plot. What's wrong with all Mari Sus falling in love with me? ?

    Boss boss: Although your taste is just the same, please come to my office later.
    Shang Weiyu: Oh woman, but I have no interest in Mari Su, I just want to go home now, thank you.


    http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=2702044
    Help! My table is broken every day by ghosts? 23 chapters
    Landlord: I have a longevity. How can a snake disease be broken at the same table? Waiting for the specific symptoms that are urgent online :

    Talking to myself all day, talking about something unknown.

    Every day I try all kinds of death methods _ :) з ”∠) _, and then show various miserable deaths!

    But here comes the problem! !! !!

    After each miserable death, the next day actually jumped around! !! !!

    It's going to scare the baby!

    QAQ loves to take away the snake disease at the same table!

    Little lover [born again] Chapter 26 raw: http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3438914

    let me go! I need to study! 20 chapter
    http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=2972382

    Xue Miao Yu Miaoyin has been secretly falling in love with Gao Leng's Xue Ba school sister Xiao Man, who was accidentally accidentally dressed as a small titty cat?
    Even if you are a cat, you have to be a cute cat from your sister's house!
    But ... she was disgusted by Xue Xue?
    Yu Miaoyin wants to cry without tears, Xuejie, don't go! Come and adopt me! Meow meow meow?

    Before adoption——
    Xiao Man: Why is this cat so cute? No, I want to restrain it. The high-cold people can't collapse. (Indifferent.jpg)
    Yu Miaoyin: Oh! Becoming a cat of school sister, rolling in the arms of school sister, hehehe ...
    After adoption-
    Xiao Man: I want to learn! But I can't control the cat's hand! How to do!
    Yu Miaoyin: Xuejie begged to be touched!

    Reading guide:
    [Eye-catching] The author has never raised a cat. Everything related to cats is conjecture. I do n’t accept provocation, thank you.
    1.cp: Xiao Man (attack) x Yu Miaoyin (received)

    Overbearing Urban Management Falling In Love With Me (GL) 12 chapters http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=2165999

    Is there one next door? Chapter 10
    http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=2189916
     
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    Thanks alot! I'll bookmark it, I have more fun reading/translating short story. I'll slowly work on this list alongside my other projects that are lengthier. Haha the next short novel I'm picking up is a smut, but once I finish that I'll do one of these short ones. Was eyeing Mistress, I want it but hadn't heard from anybody what it was about.
    Trying to finish up Who Moved My Ashes before I go on vacation ~ maybe next week.

    Patiently waiting for raw novel feedback on the one I asked about previously ~ :aww:
     
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    Sabruness Cultured Yuri Connoisseur

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    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    Just kind of a habit, When I read/watch something new, I’ll go through a good part of it then get bored and find something else. But if I delete the tab after getting bored with it, I might not be able to find it again so I leave it just incase I want to read/watch it again.
     
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    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    I am not your match, partner. I don’t like reading short stories, prefer long Chinese novels. Either way, I don’t recommend them like that, I like including the summary. Nice list, I’ll definitely check it out. Ahaha, You might become @Scribblezo8 ’s personal Chinese yuri novel recommender
     
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    List look nice at least :blobjoy: Still I'll wait until somebody will read them and made some small review about it. I still didn't catch up to reading list :blobdead: So will not take new ones until they are catchy enough.
    And that cases never happened? :blob_grin:
    Looks like tabs will receive reinforcements.:blobsweat:
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    I tried to hit on the plain girl but she counter-attacked has received continuation. Looks like it wasn't small oneshot :hmm:
     
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    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    Lol, definitely. Adding 8 more tabs to my chrome
    Personally enjoy these kinds of scenarios, whether is a gal who’s actually an innocent girl X plain looking girl who’s actually quite aggressive. It’s hot. I enjoy reversals
     
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    You know I'm not even surprised :blobrofl:
    Today was Ch. 3 of it where gyaru used counterattack on counterattack and it was super effective. :aww:
    MTLing it right now. Wanted to check first part but it was interesting, so I'm about through 1/3 of story. Won't say when I will finish it but looks like I'll read it till the end.
     
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