Writing fighting sound effects

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  1. Starvenus

    Starvenus Well-Known Member

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    I need help writing fighting scenes. The scenes itself aren't the problem but the sfx that comes with the scene is the problem.

    For example :

    A fist punch to the face, body.
    A kick to the face, body.
    Unsheathed a sword.
    A sword trust
    A sword swipe/slash
    The difference between sword sound and spear sound (or other weapon)
    Deflecting an attack with your hand, your sword.
    Receiving a blow from a fist or a weapon.
    Etc

    Anyone can help me with writing the sound effect for fight scene?
     
  2. ABMAINA

    ABMAINA ★☆☆☆☆

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  3. sinyueliang

    sinyueliang 『World Traveller』『Demon Slayer』『Hinokami』

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    I just don't write sfx. They're a pain too and honestly I think they read awkwardly no matter what. I just describe it like, the sound of metal clashing against metal, or whatever.
     
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    *Shiing* for unsheathing
     
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    ripsharl Active Member

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    Pew pew pew pew
     
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    ArgosYesu Lord of Some Lands, Editor of Others

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    Dragn555 Writer of Unnecessary Essays

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    Sword unsheath/sheath or slash: Shing~
    A slapping sound/skin on skin contact: Pa~ or Pa
    Stabbing: Shplitch~
    Metal on metal impact: Clang~!
    Rapid blows: BABABABABABA... or DADADADADA...
    Speedy slash: Just describe it as a whistle while using 'whoosh' as a sound effect
    Generally good ones that work with anything: bang, boom, whoosh

    You don't really need a lot of sound effects. Being able to describe the impact/movements with short, concise sentences usually works better.

    Example:

    "Coward! Why don't you-"

    Whoosh!

    With a sharp whistle and a gentle wind, the swordsman's blade suddenly appeared in front of the noble's face.

    •••

    Whoosh!

    The two men disappeared, leaving the ground where they were standing in a destroyed state. As their speed approached the speed of sound, only afterimages and the sound of their clashes could be perceived.

    BOOM!

    The onlookers covered their ears as the fighters shattered the sound barrier.
     
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    How about "BAM", "POW', and "KERSPLAT"?
     
  11. Cien

    Cien 『Omnivore Reader』Inactive

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    Sounds I sometimes use:
    *thug*
    *thud*
    *crash*
    *swoosh*
    *hong*
    *tang*
    *clang*
    *boom*
    *swish*
    *bang*
    *shing*
    *dring*
    *ring*
    *bzzt*
     
  12. trvc

    trvc Well-Known Member

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    I would say that use of sound effects is more appropriate for comics then novels.
     
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    lol.

    KA-BOOM! not included in story yet . . but now I will, just for you.

    Other sound effects to include: KA-SWOOSH! KA-BLAMO! KA-DOIN-DOIN! KA-JAPALAPAMARENGO! KA-SPLOOSH!
     
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    Arbiten ✯The Protagonist✯

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    For a fist punch you want more of a pow pow, not a thump thump, but something with more ping ping. You know what I mean?

    An unsheathed sword depends on the material. If it's a metal sheath it's more of a shring shring than a clank clank or a ring ring. If it's leather it makes more of a scrrrr scrrr sound with a little ping, bang and pow.

    Got it?
     
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    Ba dumm tssss~~
    When something happen as planned
     
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    Random thug appears
    "did you summon me?"
     
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    Just don't.
     
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    Nyamsus Life is full of shit and we live in it

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    "Palapalapa.....
    *papapapapapap......

    When unleashing numerous palm attacks
     
  19. Arbiten

    Arbiten ✯The Protagonist✯

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    Or using your palm for other things.....
     
  20. JarJarThinks

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    Rather than using sfx, consider let the reader make the sfx in their mind by describing the action in detail.
    Example : "As the two swordsmen began to speed up their respective movements, the sounds of clashing metal echoed throughout the cave"
     
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