Art VOTE: Novel Cover

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by Lokum, Dec 19, 2020.

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Which one's better? thxxx

  1. the 1st one

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  2. the 2nd one

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  1. Lokum

    Lokum Forum Member Banned

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    I have requested for this thread to be locked. Thank you, everyone, for leaving your vote and commenting. I changed the cover ( see here )

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  2. oblueknighto

    oblueknighto Blue Person

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    First.
     
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    I like the second one better.
     
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  4. Hasty girl

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    first
     
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  5. Lokum

    Lokum Forum Member Banned

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    The first one is sparkly and pretty, but the second one is more visible when it's small in size. So I'm gradually leaning towards the 2nd one now
     
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  6. Hasty girl

    Hasty girl [Holy Novitiate] [Red Sibling] [Blackjack Sect]

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    but I think first one catches the eye as it is shiny so many ppl will look
     
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  7. Lokum

    Lokum Forum Member Banned

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    You're not making this easier XD
    I'm now second-guessing my second-guessing. I now need to make a pause and come back with a fresh eye
     
  8. Hasty girl

    Hasty girl [Holy Novitiate] [Red Sibling] [Blackjack Sect]

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    your welcome. I am the master of confusion muhaha
     
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    Rakshanu Immortal Ero

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    make a third version with first having the center pic having fading out opacity at its edges, thus blending in the background.
    Will be perfection, because rn it looks out of place because background and foreground have vastly different colors and feel to them.

    Else second, cuz of reasons above
     
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  10. Lokum

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    Nice analysis - will try!
     
  11. Richard_04

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    I can't seem to vote both choices
     
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  12. Lokum

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    Yeah, cause I need to choose between them. Although I too, like both. (。・ω・。)ゞ
     
  13. Blitz

    Blitz ⛈️ awakened from the reverie❄️

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    I like them both although I think the first one would be better if the box dimensions were a bit different
     
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    I think 2nd, if your not gonna redo the 1st pic
     
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    What would be the actual display size/ratio? The l/w ratio is really distracting...
    Choice 1 evokes the "rain" aspect of the title more(?)
    Choice 2 seems mundane, as if you just grabbed the background from somewhere, just adding on the words

    And with both, you might want to play around with the alignment of the title and see how they look?
     
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    That's my reasoning as well. The second one is more simplistic and I like the clouds.
     
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  17. Lokum

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    Who doesn't like those care-free beauties, minding their own business up in the sky, amirite @FIEND
     
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    Second one will give a more dreamy vibe while the first is sparkly but closes off reader or makes them expect something else
     
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    I like the dreamy vibes.
    The second one feels more romance-y

    I don't know if that's good or bad, since the ML-FL relationship is more of a subplot. And the genre is crime/mystery.

    I'm leaning more and more towards the second cover. It was the original cover anyway, before I changed it to the 1st one.
     
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    That's true. Since I post on several platforms, the size varies. I'll update the thread soon with final dimensions.
    And ouch - that hurts, I tried to paint it well TuT . But it mainly hurts because that was exactly what I was thinking

    I'll change the title alignment - it was messing with my eyes as well
     
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