Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Blanc Poem Pool

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  1. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    Theme : Lonliness
    Title: No one can hear my "Voice"

    In a clear mirror, two hollows reflected.

    The silk mud could fill them,
    But a touch would melt the skin.

    Skin then flesh,
    Flesh then bone,
    Bone then Soul?

    Become one with mud?
    I am unwilling...

    My appreciation towards past and present,
    Only the silent wind could hear.

    Though the future is yet to come,
    The Passing frost my heart.

    For the wise might wrong,
    My false honest words,
    No one understands,
    Am I truely Human?

    (Hun was I drunk?)
     
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  2. udonsage

    udonsage [Underpaid Software Developer] [Lazy Novelist]

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    Title: Cooking at home
    Theme: Forgotten

    Lingering taste comes back seeking remembrance
    Teasing and twisting my old feelings
    Joyful jelly fill flavor and fluffiness of home
    It was like being in a hot-spring in the middle of a snow-field

    Distract me, keep me close with those sugary lies
    Where the strawberries run through a river of soft cake
    Stirring, constantly, whirling the summer taste around

    Eggs, sugar, flour, fruit, milk and everything nice
    Starting over from nothing but an idea
    Rising again over the smell of fortune
    Yet it’s the not same as before
    Did I remember your taste wrong?
     
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  3. udonsage

    udonsage [Underpaid Software Developer] [Lazy Novelist]

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    Title: Prisoner
    Theme: Fear

    Crimson days spent in the light
    Iron shackles in the night
    Yet another sorrow passes

    The voices carry cruelty
    Pain echoes from within
    There is no escape
    There is no escape

    Dreams comes in twos
    Warmth comes in one
    Cold comes in the other

    Paradise comes for a moment
    Sorrow takes its place
    The cycle repeats itself
    On and on it goes without delay or hurry

    Does this one have a name?
    Does this one have another?
    Does this one fears its days?

    I don’t know
    Yet another crimson day will pass
     
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  4. Wobbly

    Wobbly [Unstabbable][He Who Courts Death][Whimsical]

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    Theme: Freedom

    Title: Ignorance

    I say what I want.
    Hear what I like.
    See what I need.
    Taste only victory.
    Never feel defeated.

    I fly unchained
    and fall unfettered.
    Live and drift
    to a mundane death.

    Regrets unknown
    I free myself.
     
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  5. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    Poem Challenges
    Playing with Poems Ninth Theme (Unlocked)
    False smiles,
    Hiding the truth.
    A gaze full of Ill intention,
    From eyes filled with envy.

    Devising, Planning,
    Away from sight.
    Carefully waiting,
    The right moment.

    When you stumble,
    It smirks.
    A stifled laugh,
    Whenever you fail.
    And when you are at your weakest...
    Its poisonous words will consume your heart.

    The theme this time is [Evil Intentions] and [Secrets] which lurks in the heart of humanity.


    General Rules for housekeeping:
    1. All the previous Themes are still up for anyone who wishes to participate, we are only going to add more themes as time goes on.
    2. Please remember to tag the post of the theme you are writing, and also mention it in the post.
    3. Remember to have lots of fun~ :X3:

    Themes to date:

    Calling those who have shared poems with me, just a small challenge nothing big. You don't have to do it~ There is no time limit.

    Participants
     
  6. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    \o\ Hurahhh!
     
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  7. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    :aww:*Gasp!* I'm First! :aww:

    Theme
    : [Evil Intentions]/[Secrets]

    Title: Whispers


    Whispers
    Twitching ears, false smiles and whispered words.
    Whether by envy, wrath or fear be spurred.
    Have power beyond what we might first think.
    Once spoken, like fire, spread faster than a blink.

    They grow like weeds and infest your Hearts
    Thrown from person to person like fiery Darts.
    You laugh it off, say it's just all in good fun,
    Blind and unheeding to the damage you've done.

    You'll just keep going on with your "games"
    Leaving others behind to put out the flames.
    You think your words are hidden away in the dark.
    Not seeing it blinds you to those who you mark.

    But I already know you'll not heed a word,
    In your desire to whisper and see the pot stirred.
    So I'll give this warning; When you're out talking smack,
    Don't be surprised when darts are aimed at your back
     
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  8. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Make enemies, and you may be stabbed back~ ufufufu~
    (my only idea for another title will be "Evil Whispers")
     
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  9. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    *nod nod* Thanks! You working on one too?
     
  10. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Well~ brainstorming for now~
     
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  11. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    ^__^ looking forward to it,
     
  12. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    Theme: [Evil Intentions]/[Secrets]

    Title: Voices


    Hello, I am your friend.
    No matter how scary, i'll be there till end.
    Only you my friend, the voice you hear.
    'The Mask', i'll protect you dear.

    Oh hey friend, as horny as i can be.
    You and i meet, the shy and the pervert me.
    Girls and Porns? I am your man.
    'The pervert'? I'll find your woman.

    Greetings, interested in carnage?
    Or you just want me to clean your garbage.
    Nice to meet you, an expert at murder.
    'The Psycho', may you be in my order.

    The fake, the rapist and a killer.
    They lie, rape and commit murder.
    All of them, gathered in your head.
    Once to help your pitiful life, turn it up-side-down.

    A pitiful man, born from isolation.
    In a world, born from competition.
    The moment he lose control of power.
    'The Voices' be the new Owner.
     
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  13. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Theme: [Evil Intentions]/[Secrets]
    Title: Evil Waits


    Caged in dark, hope in vain.
    Chained in place, freedom lost.
    Break she might, gone the light.
    Only silence, bring her peace.
    Insane man, is what she fear.

    Watch in shadow, he stare the prize.
    Madness dwell, the loving eyes.
    The one he like, shall be his prey.
    Greediness grow, with inner whispers.
    Rotten within, his heart alone.

    Await a chance, it's time tonight.
    One shall vanish, and evil destroy.
    Singing in joy, scarlet blooms.
    Faking weakness, she masked fear.
    Hidden desire, is to kill.
     
  14. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    here we go~
     
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  15. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    /o/ I Like it! That was a nice twist at the end!
     
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  16. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Fufufufu~ I wanted an evil trist at the end~

    Kinda used the idea of waiting to fail from biel's poem~
     
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  17. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Waiting to fail?

    This theme is hard for me >u< Sio did so wonderfully well in expressing the feelings. Rhyming but not overly blatant about it. So nicely done and with good taste.
     
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  18. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    Yep, its well done.
     
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  19. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    I think the idea was already in me, but what took long, was to find the right word to the right place~
    I wanted to have a good flow, so some rhymes was mixed in~
     
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  20. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    The idea was already in you? *Gasp!* Sio! What are you planning for poor Dev?! QΔQ!!!